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有效地采用了多种衔接方法，层次清晰；能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了。
Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment There is a increasingly hot debate whether the Tourism will bring harm to the environment or not. In China, tourism is a booming business. Everything has its two sides, on the one hand, tourism can increase prosperity, on the other hand, it might lead to burden of littler of scenic spot. As far as I am concerned, I stand in the middle about these two ideas. I have several reasons about this. As follows: first, because of tourism, some poor cities depend on its tourism resources and then get much wealth. If we have more money, we can use more money to make our scenic spot more clear and beautiful; second, when we go to some scenic spots, what we can do is to do not throw garbage at will, we should throw them in the bin, if we do this, our surrounding environment must be clear . In summary, if we travel to some places, we should keep "low-carbon" decipline, we should get along well with our environment, only do this can we have a more beautiful environment and home.
