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As we all known,it's unwise to make conclusion as soon as we hear something. for one thing, it could be a good matter if we have a deep thought before we come into conclusion.It will help us have a clear brain and make the best choice. For another, we could not make sure whatever chioce we chooose is right, so,it is more important to thought a second time. If a man make a conclusion without a deep thought , he must make wrong anway . Thing changes very quickly , so is our thought . it may change a lot at anytime ,and your idear vary so soon.
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