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Is It Wise to Make Friends Online? Nowadays it is getting much easier to make friends with the help of Internet.Admittedly,making friends online is convenient,but it also brings a lot problems. First,we may not make real friends online.As we can't see each other on the Internet,it is hard for us to tell whether the person we are chatting with is telling the truth or not.In other words,he may be insincere and pretend to be our friend out of evil motivation. Therefore,it is likely that we will expose ourselves to potential dangers.For example, our property security may be threatened.Second,even if we have been friends,this kind of friendship may not last for a long time.We may find the person is quite different from that he is online,since we can only communicate with each other through words.However,in the real world,we can see his expressions,behaviors and so on.Then we may be disappointed that the person doesn't deserve to be our friends.Eventually,we are strangers again. In conclusion,it is not a sensible way to make friends online.Only in the real world can we make a real friend.
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