拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;全文结构较为严谨;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用。
It is unwise to make a decision instantly when we see and listen something.A good decision must can be done after a careful consideration and having some specific survey.Sometimes,having a conclusion must experience a long time .For example,when we are eating an apple,but this apple is tasted acid.can we say that all the apple are acid?The answer must be no.If we have some questions about the apple, we should taste many apples other than one apple.maybe this apple is just a bad one,so we can't get a decision instantly .most of these decisions are wrong.
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