句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;文章组织结构良好。
I have many good friends, one of my good friends, her name is Landy Yu, she is beautiful and smart. She is really nice to me. Everytime when I have some trouble, she always with me, and she is a good listener. I really like her.I hope we can be best friends forever.