小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend her name is Landy Yu. She has a long black hair. She is beautiful and smart. She is really nice to me. Everytime when I have some trouble, she always with me, and she is a good listener. I really like her.I hope we can be best friends forever.