上下文衔接稍显不流畅;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;作者能较熟练地使用丰富的词汇,但请加强单词拼写的检查。
hi David: how are you? I received your letter yesterday. I heard about that you will come to China and learned Chinese,I'm very happy,but I tell you Chinese is a very hard language,but you don't worried I will give some suggestions. First,you should study pinyin then you read a simple sentense, read a simple story,second ,you remember need listen to radio,partise your listening , spend to more time read and listen,fually I help .if you have any questions, I'm glad help you I 'm looking forward hearing you soon love Chen qiang