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With more and more pressure on people in today's society,it seems that it is ever so important to maintain a good mood,for it is not only beneficial mentally but also physically. Keeping a good mood makes people more optimistic,thus human beings can face all the obstacles with a smile on their face,standing up and fight against all the difficulties.What's more,being always in a good mood shall make other people willingly to communicate with you.As a result,more communication relieves pressure,doing good to your mental health. Furthermore,a good mood helps people stay physically healthy as well.It is scientifically confirmed that a good mood will more or less do good to to the functions of human bodies,so they can work in a more ordered way. Based on the above mentioned factors,we can safely draw the conclusion that keeping a good mood is of great importance to us human beings.So stop wearing a long face all the time,come and smile every day to make your body healthier.
