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Providing that a friend of mine is coming to visit China, the most interesting place I have a proposal in taking him to visit is Zhanjiang, my attactive hometown. From my perspective, it goes without saying that Zhanjiang is of significance with its amazing history as well as its fantastic culture. The factors why I strongly recommend my friend to pay a visit to Zhanjiang lie in the following four aspects. To start with, located in the southernmost part of China, Zhanjiang, which is also called Kwangchowan, is known as a coastal city with a long history and rich folk culture and folk art. It's universally acknowledged that the culture of Leizhou is one of the fourth culture of Guangdong province, among which Leizhou dialect and lion dance take the most important role. What's more, there are many interesting places worth a visiting, including Huguangyan, sea view corridor, Donghai island, Techeng island and so on. As is called as the Museum of natural history, Huguangyan is famous for its special geology with the highest value in the research of Maar Lake. Last but not least, the colorful city has a variety of special and delicious food, such as plain boiled chicken and grilled oysters. With the exception of there, sea food is also regarded as the special food there owing to its location. From my point of view, my foreigner friend not only can enjoy the distinctive culture and spots, but also taste the local flavor in Zhanjiang. With all of there above, I assume my friend will have an extremely overjoying time here.
