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For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .
You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。
恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒；若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量，注意几处拼写错误。
In our society,there is a obvious tendency that many people are like to judge a person by their appearance. Is it a wise choice to judge the person by the external beauty rather than the inner . This is not the correct perception.Although,in our traditional mind that a man who has a good appearance would get more opportunities than the bad.May be it will got a good first impression in their greeting ,love. But we should not ignore the fact ,if you want to commnicate with someone ,the inner beatuy is more important than the appearance. With the rapid development of the technology,the ugly perosn can change their appearanceby surgey,but the really one in their heart does't changed. So,this is not wise to judge the person by their appearance.
