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文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。
The Ways to Save Money In our daily life,money plays an important role.More and more people try their best to save their money.As for me,the best way is that put the money on the most important thing every time. First,we should make a plan that about how to spend our money reasonably,which can make us have a good habit and have a regular life. Second,we can't waste our money and it is necessary to know how to save our money,in case we use money urgently.Third, it is common for us to buy our necessary things.In this case,we should buy them in bond of the good quality and low prices.I think it is useful. In my eyes,the three ways to save money are the best. If we spend money reasonably, we would have a regular and wealthy life.