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高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

发布时间:2013-05-16 16:20浏览次数:22880
要求:
某英文杂志新设“我的家乡”专栏向读者征文,请按下面提供的要点写一篇100个词左右的短文,介绍你的家乡过去的情况和现在的变化,向该杂志投稿。短文标题已给出。
过去:家乡小镇绿树环抱;小河清清鱼儿嬉戏;房屋简陋 街道狭窄;人们劳作生活清贫;现在:高楼大厦厂店林立;大小车辆驰骋街头;工业发展环境恶化;树木减少鱼儿消失;治理污染当务之急。
用户的作文(系统评分48.5分
评语:

行文流畅,但衔接词比较少;文中句子偏简单,可增加从句使用量;文中词汇表达较为丰富准确,但存在单词拼写错误。

用户练习作文:

My hometown is not large but it was beautifui.There used to be plenty of trees around it.A river ran through ang there was a lot of fish frolic in it.The housees were small and ugly.The streets use to be narrow.The peopie who lived in the town worked hard to make living.With time going by,the town has changed a lot.The stand lots of tall buildings.Lots of cars run on the road. With the development of industry, people are faced with the problem of a worsening environment.There are less ang less trees and fish. now it is our duty to solve the pollution.Let us take action to make differences to the environment.I believe it will be better and better.

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