小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

单词拼写做的很棒，还请注意增加词汇的积累；增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；不能熟练使用过渡词，基本没有衔接词。

I have a good friend. She is a beautiful girl.She has black long hair.Her big eyes likes stars. She is a helpful girl. She always help others to deal with some problems.Once,i took the bus with her.When her saw a old people stood on the bus,her gave up her seat to the old. This is my good friend.Do you like her?