缺少组织,上下文衔接稍显不流畅;句法知识较好,但需加强句式变化;文章用词太过单一,本文单词拼写错误较多。
Dear classmates Those days,I kenw someone dislike English,They think it too difficult to can not study,now I will take some minites to study English. The first,lishen to English music at night lishen Engish misic can influence your listen.The second,talk to English to teather, It can improve your English spokn.last but not least,study English garmmer every day.