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2012年专四作文真题:端午节

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要求：: 题目 The Dragon Boat Festival
说明 The Dragon Boat Festival(端午节)is one of the important national festivals in China.Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a composition of about 200 words on the following topic The Dragon Boat Festival First, you should tell what you know about the festival Second, you should describe how you or other people usually observe the festival Marks will be awarded for content, organization language and appropriateness Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数：200满分：100分

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拼写很棒，可适当增加高级词汇的使用；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富，层次欠清晰。

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In China,The Dragon Boat Festival is a traditional and national festival.Usually,it takes place in June.Almost all the Chinese will celebrate the festival with some traditional activities. People around me celebrate the festival by drinking Realgar wine and rowing dragon boats.What's more,people will eat dumplings to commemorate Qu Yuan.When the dragon boat race begins,people would yelling or waving excitedly on the bank,hoping the team they like would win the race.It's quite a dramatic scene. Since dumplings are very delicious and the race is exciting,I love the festival very much.

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