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I had a dream yesterday, the dream about Alice, she is a pretty girl. She took me to the Wonderland, there were flowers of variety, they can talk. There are many small animals that fly around in the sky, I tried my best to fly, but failed. Alice gave me a silk coat with special function, and I put it on, I could fly same as high as them. I was so excited. Suddenly, I fallen down by un-careful, I called help by yell out, finally I wake up, It's all the dream.