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I had a dream of Alice yesterday. She was a beautiful girl. She took me to wonderland. There were different kinds of beautiful flowers, and they could speak. Many small animals flew around in the sky. I tried my best to fly but failed. Then Alice gave me a special silk coat. I put it on and I flew as high as them. How excited I was! Suddenly, I fell down. I shouted for help. . . I woke up in the end, and it was a dream.
