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Hi,David: How are you ? my name is Li Hua ,I'm a middle school student, I live in shanghai at China.At school, I studied many course ,but I most like course is English and I can sing so many English songs. In the leisure ,I like to collection stamp and sports .I like play basketball and pingpang ball,I want to visit to England,because England is a beautiful country and her history is very interesting. My classmates wants to find friends in the internet ,I hope you help my classmates find their friends. I'm looking forward hearing your soon yours LI Hua