2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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I am born in Yinbing,and I am grow up in there. Yinbing is a beautful city,there is three rivers,Jinsha river and Ming river are meeting, and then long river is generated which is the longest river in China. Yinbing have many interesting place.such as Wuliangye corporation, the ocean of banbeo ,Cuiping mountain,and so on. But the most interesting place I think is the ocean of rock.It is a magic place,a miracles.there have many rocks,some of its have the unbeliveable look,that crook just like someone made but it is God make.And in the center,the ocean of the rock have a mysterious cave.Its very beautiful,have many magic room,rocks grow on the cave.Because of a river dawn the surface,in the hot summer,the cave is cool,in the cold winter，the cave is warm. I guess you love there.