2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用高级词汇。

I am born in Yinbing,and I grow up in there. Yinbing is a beautiful city,there are three rivers,Jinsha river and Ming river are meeting, and then long river is generated which is the longest river in China. Yinbing has many interesting places.such as Wuliangye corporation, the ocean of bamboo ,Cuiping mountain,and so on. But the most interesting place I think is the ocean of rock.It is a magic place,a miracle.There have many rocks,some of its have the unbelieveable look,that crook just like someone made but it is God make.And in the center,the ocean of rock has a mysterious cave.Its very beautiful,have many magic room,rocks grow on the cave.Because of a river dawn the surface,in the hot summer,the cave is cool,in the cold winter，the cave is warm. I guess you love there.