邢台二中2012―2013学年上学期高二年级期末测试试卷英语作文

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How to improve school safety From 2010,it happened a few campus violent incidents which make us shocked.It push us think about how to improve school safety.Here are my advices. Firstly,the school should warn students to be careful when they in outing.And tell their parents to pick up them in day off.Secondly,the security guard must be strict with students.If he or she doesn't have promise ,the security guard should turn down.Finally,it's important to teach students how to protect themselves when they in danger.So it's good choice to have a protect class. I hope the campus violent incidents won't happen again and students can grow up healthy .