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My good friend, her name is xiao ou. She has black long hair and big eyes. She is very kind and cute. We were classmates in hight school. We often went back home together . We often go out in holiday. We lived in small city. In the small city, she lived with her family in a old two floor wooden building. Sometimes, in the weekend, i visited her and talked in the two floor wooden building. We talked about anything we are interested in. One day, she told me that her neightboor was a rude boy. The boy often spat anywhere, and one time,she saw the boy spot at her house door. Now, we spererated about ten years. After i left my hometown, i have never seen her. I often missed her.