雅思写作范文:出国旅游的利弊

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These days,there are more and more poeple travel to the foreign countries,for it is much more convenient than ever before. Different people have different views on this development. Some people think it has a negative effect ,because it may cause a lot of conflicts between different cultures.Meanwhile tourists' inproper behavior may do damage to the visiting sights. But in my opinion,travel to other countries makes more positive efffect than negative.Firstly,travelling to foreign countries gives an effective access to different cultures,more ideas will be producted than conflicts.Secondly,tourism industry can accelerate both local and foreign district's economics with less pollution than traditional industry. Last but not the least,travel to other countries give people a chance to make friends all over the world ,which is very interesting I think. All in all,more and more people travel to other countries is a positive development not only on social aspect but on a personal aspect.