雅思写作范文:出国旅游的利弊

作者有一定功底，可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆；语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达，一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活。

These days,there is more and more people travel to the foreign countries,for it is much more convenient than ever before. Different people have different views on this development. Some people think it has a negative effect,because it may cause a lot of conflicts between different cultures.Meanwhile,tourists' improper behaviors may do damage to the visited spots. But in my opinion,travel to other countries makes more positive effect than negative.Firstly,travelling to foreign countries gives an effective access to different cultures,more ideas will be produced than conflicts.Secondly,tourism industry can accelerate both local and foreign district's economics with less pollution than traditional industry.Last but not least,travel to other countries give people a chance to make friends all over the world,which is very interesting I think.All in all,more and more people travel to other countries is a positive development not only on social aspect but on a personal aspect.