但从句使用不熟练,注意平时练习中多积累;作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累高级词汇;衔接成分偏少。
My good friend, her name is Xiao Ou. She has long hair and big eyes. She is very kind and cute. We were pupils in hight school. We often went back home together. We often go out in holiday. We lived in a small city. In the small city, she lived with her family in an old two floors wooden building. Sometimes, in the weekend, i visited her and talked in the two floors wooden building. We talked about anything that we are interested in. One day, she told me that her neighbour was a rude boy. The boy often spat anywhere, and one time,she saw the boy spatting at her house door. Now, we separated about ten years. After i leaving my hometown, i have never seen her. I often miss her.