文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
Recently I found that some students lost their heart in English.On behalf of English class,I decided to spirit them. As we all know,English is very important to us.Because we will use English frequently in day life.So if we learn English well,the life will be more easy to us.Therefore,I would like to give you some advice about how to learn English.On the one hand,you should remember many words and grammars.As the result,you must strength your memory and spend more time on English.On the other hand,you should find interest in English.Due to the interest is helpful to study English.It can make the process more effective.So it is a good choice to watch some English movies.And you should also make notes in class. I believe that you will make great progress by hardworking.At last,I hope you can learn English well.