正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。
Dear David, How are you? In your last e-mail,you told me that you will come to Beijing to study Chinese,and you want to know something about it.So today I will give you some suggestions which I hope can be of some help for you. You know... as a language ,Chinese needs environment.So you should put yourself into a Chines environment.like watching Chines film,drama and variety show, listening to music and radio, talking with your chinese friends,etc.Just make you surrounded with Chinese.And I think it is necessary to remember chinese word and study grammar systematically.There are variety online classes which may help you.And the most important thing I think is that you need to have a strong determination,and do practice everyday.If you have any other questions , please ask me.I'm sure you will learn Chinese well. Hope to see you soon in Beijing. Yours Wang Ming