Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
作者学术词汇使用比较准确,词汇表达较丰富,但仍需增加词汇积累;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用;采用了一些简单的从句。
According to the chart above,we can know that a person's income is proportional to the level of education.such as a college graduated can get 1000Dollar but a migrant workers just is 100dollar. so I think it is important for everyone to get education. The fact revealed by these data is obvious: a degree does bring distinctive financial benefits to its holders.the less than high school diploma's wages is one four the doctoral degree. it is like one person