题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
学术词汇使用较丰富,拼写做的很棒;简单句稍微有点多,可适当增加从句使用;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
Man and Computer Computer is seem to become our necessity in daily life.People extremely count on the computer.It is a warn that the real danger is not that the computer will begin to think like man,but that man will begin to think like the computer. First,I have to admit that the saying gives a good alarm bell to us.The computer is just a intelligent machine who was invented by human being.One day if the computer begin to think like man,it means our science is highly developed,in other word,it means human is so smart.It's an inspiring thing.However, if man will begin to think like the computer,it's very sad,it means human is controlled by computer,it backs the culture of human up.why does this phenomenon occur?The reason is that human much too rely on computer and ignore thinking and solving problem by themselves.let computer dominate the human's world . Taking these factors into consideration,we could give a conclusion that computer is a tool to help us solve problems but not a God command us everything in our lives.