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The dragon boat festival, which is in memory of QuYuan, is one of the important festival in China.It is an ancient festival that began 2000 years ago.And on the day every year,students can have a holiday. As we all know,there are some customes about the festival. First, we eat zongzi and have a dragon-boat racing.Second, we make some sachets and children wear them playing happily.Third, we sing the poems which were writen by QuYuan and feel the feelings of him.It is unbelievable. In summary,The Dragon Boat Festival is the day that makes people miss QuYuan and make children happy and unforgettable.It can produce marvolous power.As the important culture in our counrtry,we shoud protect it and cherich the pretty time now.
