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若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用，文章会更棒；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。
The Dragon Boat Festival, which is in memory of QuYuan, is one of the most important festivals in China.It was an ancient festival that had began since 2000 years ago.And on the day every year,students can have a holiday. As we all know,there are some customs and habits about the festival. First, we eat zongzi and have a dragon-boat racing.Second, we make some sachets and children wear them playing happily.Third, we sing the poems which were written by QuYuan and feel the feelings of him.It is unbelievable. In summary,The Dragon Boat Festival is the day that makes people miss QuYuan and make children happy and unforgettable.It can produce enormous power.As the important culture in our country,we should protect it and cherish the beautiful day.
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