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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33544
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分82.5分
评语:

作者词汇基础扎实;作者在句法层面做的很棒;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒。

用户练习作文:

Friends, is a classic American television sitcom, created by David Crane and Marta Kauffman, which originally aired on NBC from September 22, 1994, to May 6, 2004, lasting ten seasons, which describes many interesting stories relating to daily life happened to six friends in Manhattan, New York. They have lived together for ten years and have face different problems regarded with friendship, career, love and life. It is not only a classic American television sitcom, but also have shows the different views on friendship comparing to the Chinese. With the further development of the globalization and the cooperation between China and The United States, the number of the students studying in America is increasing. However, American’s views on friendship confuse many Chinese students studying aboard. According to dramatistic pentad, friends combing with some classic movies about friendship will be analyzed in terms of act, scene, agent, agency, and purpose. on the one hand, the further understanding of the American views on friendship benefits to deal with the misunderstanding, and eliminate the barrier of making friends crossing boundaries. Learning how to take right an attitude towards different views on friendship plays an important role in the establishing of the friends and the development of friends. On the other hand, it is beneficial to realize the difference of Chinese self-culture.

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