高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；注意文中个别的句子错误；文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，不过单词拼写做的很棒；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用；连词使用偏少。

My hometown is surrounded by the green tree in the past,the cornfield is stretch as far as the eye could see,(the river is clean and clear,we can catch fish,and see the fish are loving swimming),the water is so transparent that we can see the fishes swimming.the building is simple,the street is narrow.People is hard working,but live in poverty, Now people live in the tower,the car is cross the road,the environment is worse,the trees is cut down,the fish is disappear,it is important is to improve the environmen.