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拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;文章衔接手法恰当;可适当增加复合句和从句的使用。
The cultural shock of the value of friendship make people be afraid of being friends with foreign friends and disturb people the way of making friends and attitudes towards them. There are two examples as follows: e.g. Mr. Qian and Mr. Zhao are good friends, Mr. Qian in the United States,while Mr. Zhao in China, Mr. Zhao had borrowed money to Mr. Zhao through the economic crisis. Subsequently, Mr. money repaid all debts, including interest, and also helped Mr. Zhao to arrange his daughter for studying in a university in the United States. A year later, Mr. Zhao asked Mr. Qian to help his nephew to find a job in the United States. Mr. Qian's friend, Jackson, was very confused. He said that it could not understand Mr. Qian help Mr. Zhao again and again and think Mr. Zhao is too mean.[3] e.g Someone invited a foreigner to eat a meal. Although the foreigner determined to pay his share of the meal, the man did not make it. Thus, the person thought that the foreigner should teach him English, or should amend their thesis. The result is likely to be unpleasant. The foreigner did not feel that he had the responsibility to help him for the meal. However, the man though that the foreigner is too selfish, even that he is not willing to help him amend the thesis at the cost of hours.[4]