高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

运用了丰富的复杂句；文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，不过单词拼写做的很棒；全文结构较为严谨；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用；连词使用偏少。

My hometown is surrounded by the green tree in the past,the cornfield is stretch as far as the eye could see,(the river is clean and clear,we can catch fish,and see the fish swimming),the water is so transparent that we can see the fishes swimming.the building is simple,the street is narrow.People hard work,but live in poverty, Now people live in the tower,the car is cross the road,the environment is worse,the trees is cut down,the fish is disappear,it is important is to improve the environmen.