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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33550
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分81.0分
评语:

文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;文章衔接手法恰当。

用户练习作文:

The cultural shock of the value of friendship makes people be afraid of being friends with foreign friends and disturb people the way of making friends and attitudes towards them. There are two examples as follows: Mr. Qian and Mr. Zhao are good friends. Mr. Qian in the United States,while Mr. Zhao in China, Mr. Zhao had borrowed money to Mr. Zhao through the economic crisis. Subsequently, Mr. money repaid all debts, including interest, and also helped Mr. Zhao to arrange studying in a university for his daughter in the United States. A year later, Mr. Zhao asked Mr. Qian to help his nephew to find a job in the United States. Mr. Qian's friend, Jackson, was very confused. He said that it could not understand Mr. Qian helped Mr. Zhao again and again and thought Mr. Zhao was too mean.[3] Someone invited a foreigner to eat a meal. Although the foreigner determined to pay his share of the meal, the man did not make it. Thus, the person thought that the foreigner should teach him English, or should help him modify his thesis. The result is likely to be unpleasant. The foreigner did not feel that he had the responsibility to help him for the meal. However, the man though that the foreigner is too selfish, even that he is not willing to help him amend the thesis at the cost of hours.[4]

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