高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；句式变化多样；作者词汇量偏少，也有些单词拼写错误；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用；连词使用偏少。

My hometown is surrounded by the green tree in the past,the cornfield is stretch as far as the eye could see (the river is clean and clear,we can catch fish,and see the fish swimming),the water is so transparent that we can see the fishes swimming.The building is simple,the street is narrow.People hard work,but live in poverty, Now person live in the tower,the car is cross the road,the environment is dreadful,the trees are cut down,the fish disappear,it is important to improve the environment.