十一期间(National Holiday),你的同学晓璐邀请你到他家乡做客。你受到了他们一家人的热情款待,并且参观了很多漂亮的名胜古迹。请写一封感谢信给你的同学,主要包括如下内容:
1.感谢同学的热情邀请;
2.对他及家人的热情款待表示感激;
3.表达他家乡的美景给你留下了深刻的印象;
4.再次感谢他们一家人,并真诚地邀请你的同学到你家里做客。
【精析】这是一封威谢信。首先要注意信的格式,而且需将题目要求的四项内容一一列出,内容并不复杂,可以不使用完整的句子。其次要尽量表达出自己的感谢之情。
文章层次较为清晰;句法知识较好,但需加强句式变化;请作者注意积累词汇量,以及注意单词拼写的检查。
Dear xiaolu: Thank you so much you invite me visit your home town.I appreciate you and your family enthusaisum and picked up to visit so many beatiful old artheitect, At the time I feel very happy . your home town is a beatiful city, quiet ,clean warm it's like to my home town I felt return to my home town. thanks again I hope you and your family come to my home town, soon. loves