语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;有效的运用了一些复杂句;文章词汇丰富度较好,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活。
As the economy society develop dramatically,Internet has going into our daily life,it has become a part of our study and work life,an increasing number of people has attracted in making friends.Obviously,there are exsited various potential issues,such as cheating case. Although the internet brings a kind of convenient and effective in making friends,the disadvantage overweight advantage.First of all,even if the internet supports lots of convenient to communicate with others in net,we don't know the net friend who is a good or bad man.Secondly,without face to face communicate with others no one obtain truly friendship.The last but not the least,if we spend much time in making friends in internet,we will lose our truly friendship and family. Consequently,it is significantly vital to take a measure to keep a balance on making net friends.On the onehand,we should control our time on internet to avoid we wil fall down in our study.On the other hand,we should learn how to protect ourselves from the net liar.Only in this way can we have a colorful and wonderful future in the ruthless society.
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