2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

文中单词拼写做的很棒，再多积累些词汇就更好了；可适当增加从句的使用，注意文中的一些小错误；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

I known you want to pay a visit my hometown.Then I will make a plan for you. At first, we are going to Jiu Zhaigou, where has excellent mountain and green river. It is a place where relax our. Otherwise, we can take a walk at street, it will make you known how colorful of my hometown. What's more, we can do some sports together. Perhaps, we are fishing, blast.