十一期间(National Holiday),你的同学晓璐邀请你到他家乡做客。你受到了他们一家人的热情款待,并且参观了很多漂亮的名胜古迹。请写一封感谢信给你的同学,主要包括如下内容:
1.感谢同学的热情邀请;
2.对他及家人的热情款待表示感激;
3.表达他家乡的美景给你留下了深刻的印象;
4.再次感谢他们一家人,并真诚地邀请你的同学到你家里做客。
【精析】这是一封威谢信。首先要注意信的格式,而且需将题目要求的四项内容一一列出,内容并不复杂,可以不使用完整的句子。其次要尽量表达出自己的感谢之情。
文中衔接词丰富;能够使用一些不错的从句;文中词汇多样性稍有欠缺,单词拼写也要更仔细。
Dear Xiao Lu I am writing the letter regarding at the National Holiday ,Thank you invited me went to your home town,I appreciate you and your family give me so enthsusim treat, so spend a lot of time accompany me to visited betiful old history sight. I feel like to return my home I am very like your home town view, It's very quiet ,clean and warm. thanks again.I am going to invite you and your family come to my home town I look forward to hearing you soon yours jessica