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假设你是某公司销售助理王海，请给David Smith先生写一封回信，内容包括：
1感谢对方订购100箱衬衫；
2建议用纸箱而不用木箱装运，并列举纸箱的优点；你公司最近与别的美国公司交易中也用过纸箱，效果很好；
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Dear David Smith
可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意个别句子错误；作者词汇表达不够灵活，但有些单词拼错了。
Dear David Smith I am writing this letter who thank you order 100 boxes shirts for my company. I suggestion you used paper box as transport materital, because the paper box is light simple ,earily,wood box is too heavily, need spend many times. I know your company recently trade with American company used this paper boxes, at the transport, every thing is good. I look forward to hearing you soon your Jessica
