高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

加强一些长句和复杂句的使用；不能熟练使用过渡词，基本没有衔接词；文中词汇表达较为丰富准确，但存在单词拼写错误。

My hometown was a little town surrouded by trees. A small river crossed it. it was clear and fish swam freely in it. Humble houses stood on the both sides of narrow streets. People worded hardly and lived a poor life. After many years of economic development, it has a great change. It has a lot of high buildings and factories. Many cars runs in the streets. But the development of industry caused serious polution of envirment. Trees are not much as before. Fish was disppeared in the river. It is time we need take proper steps to solve the pollution problem.