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Recently, there is an argument about whether government should ask people who have private cars for pollution tax. As for the problem,different people have different opinions.But as for me,I think it is necessary to take this step.Of course,I have ma own reasons.The reasons are as follows. First,as we all know,we face the problem that the environment around us is terrible now. Of course, the waste air from cars can makes the environment problem more serious. Second,because of more and more cars, we also face many traffic problems.For example,there are more and more phenomenons like traffic jams.Third, it is important to protect the health of people and nature.In addition, if there are too many private cars,the quality of people's life would be decrease. In all, it is important to take this step to limit the number of private cars. For the development of our country,we should aware of our duties.
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