高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；行文较为流畅，作者文中过渡词使用的不错。

It makes a major difference from my home town.In the past, there were many trees around my town,fish could be seen swimming in the clear river,although the houses were minor and simple and the streets weren't wide enough like now. And people even very poor but we were very pleased to see the lovely environment. And now,you can see tall buildings everywhere and a great number of cars in the street that it can make you feel bad.The factories make our environment worse than before.The trees are not so many like it were in the past.The fish can't be seen swimming in our town now. So it is crucial for people to protect the environment so that the environment will be better in the future.