2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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According to the chart above,we can know that a person's income is proportional to the level of education.such as a college graduated can get 1000Dollar but a migrant workers just is 100dollar. so I think it is important for everyone to get education. The fact revealed by these data is obvious: a degree does bring distinctive financial benefits to its holders.the less than high school diploma's wages is one four the doctoral degree.it is like a man in the sky ,a man on the ground,it's a very big gap.