小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

简单句偏多了；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳；文中用词稍显贫乏，文中存在一些拼写错误。

I have a good friend.She named lily.She has two balck shine eyes,beutiful nose and samll mouth.She is very tall and silm.we often play together,talk to each other and we talk each other anythings.She is very smart and awayls help me on study.I really apriciate her.I wish we can be best friend forever.