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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8973
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分60.5分
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文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;句式变化较为明显,另外句法层面做的不错;请注意词汇表达的多样性及拼写错误,尤其加强高级词汇的使用。

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When we first meet a person,most of us would give a first impression just by one's appearance,but after experienced something together,we would have a new judgement.JUST as the old saying goes,"Never can we judge persons by their appearance." For example,facing a poor man,one person whose cloth is colorful could give nothing to the poor but kidding.Then a begger could give the poor all things he has.There are so many people ignor the beggers,just because their clothes are dirty,their hair is mess,they don't have a pair of shoes.So what?they have a kind heart,they are willing to try their best to help those who need help.They are so good. In a word,it would be better that we know people by hearts rather then appearance.

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