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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4565
要求:
题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分74.0分
评语:

语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;可适当增加高级词汇的使用量。

用户练习作文:

No one could live well in the world without communication.But sometimes people could have this or that things which cause them couldn't meet each other at once.Then the internet could help to perfect this shortcoming. Humanbeing are a kind of senior animal who have fellings,so they need family,friends and colleagues to talk with to express their fellings.Everyone has a time of lonely,every this time they will call friends to talk or do some relaxing activities.Through doing these,they find themselves happy.On the other hand,when some misunderstanding things happen,there also need communication.But if you don't want to face the people whom you will talk with,you can have a witchat or QQ to have a heart communication to solve your misagreements. As technology develops quickly,the internet is showing more and more important impacts.All in all,interpersonal communication is important and couldn't be absent.

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