作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用;作者能较多样的使用词汇表达,但要注意词汇拼写的检查。
As we all know, English has already become an international language. It is widely used in the world. However, a few students find it hard to master it. Let me show how to slove it. First, make up your mind to learn English well and never give it up. Second, it is an effective way to read the text loundly in the morning and try to remember the important words, phrases and patterns. Third, it is suggested that you should finish all the homework on time. When you don't come across some problems, turn to your teachers or classmates for help. Don't be afraid of making mistakes. Thus, all of us will make great progress one day.